tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1421861102069212782.post787264405481463392..comments2024-03-08T12:16:42.093+04:00Comments on Abstracted ~: Shattered Hope [Finale]Maryam http://www.blogger.com/profile/03760200490233142764noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1421861102069212782.post-61705488902838667342011-04-23T16:53:24.641+04:002011-04-23T16:53:24.641+04:00Khadija: Appreciated.
Kitty: Ask anything you wa...Khadija: Appreciated. <br /><br />Kitty: Ask anything you want, I'm ready to answer. Thanks for reading, I've written other stories as well, don't forget to check them out. Would love to hear your thoughts.Maryam https://www.blogger.com/profile/03760200490233142764noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1421861102069212782.post-18866966800709174912011-04-23T01:26:16.089+04:002011-04-23T01:26:16.089+04:00hi 2 all :)
i'm in a bit of a shock right now...hi 2 all :)<br /><br />i'm in a bit of a shock right now i dont not how this came to b, what happened all of a sudden? like i said im kinda shocked right now <br /><br />i hav alot to ask and say but i kinda .. can't talk .. right now. one very important thing i must say first is that ur story was great (no jk) <br /><br />wow! when it comes to surprises im not so ready <br /><br />p.s. kittynoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1421861102069212782.post-21339509836484246892011-04-01T14:00:34.825+04:002011-04-01T14:00:34.825+04:00hiii kitten ,
I really like your writing style ,,...hiii kitten , <br />I really like your writing style ,,, your story is deep & emotional ... <br /><br />wish U all the best sis <br />am waiting on fire to read your next 1<br /><br /><br />p.s : I`ll be glad if you pass by new blog ;)Princesshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07247540526685417158noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1421861102069212782.post-6621674424661683942010-09-03T15:14:46.836+04:002010-09-03T15:14:46.836+04:00Lujaina: Thanks for stopping by and your words mea...<b>Lujaina</b>: Thanks for stopping by and your words mean a lot to me. :)Maryam https://www.blogger.com/profile/03760200490233142764noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1421861102069212782.post-77757428498005163412010-09-03T09:16:07.057+04:002010-09-03T09:16:07.057+04:00I can see your short story collection in a publish...I can see your short story collection in a published book, it is well written, and definitely a page-turner ;).<br /><br />Keep it up, <br />Tinta!Lulu's veiwhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17982103654797762517noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1421861102069212782.post-91736333955829586772010-02-14T11:34:15.649+04:002010-02-14T11:34:15.649+04:00Unexpected unexpected *screams*
If you added a fi...Unexpected unexpected *screams* <br />If you added a fifth part to it though, I mean before the ending. If it was a tad bit longer but overall me likes it =DRumaithahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04251643685259292299noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1421861102069212782.post-37261423814887707322010-02-13T19:42:46.870+04:002010-02-13T19:42:46.870+04:00The ending is so unexpected, loved it. Eventhough,...The ending is so unexpected, loved it. Eventhough, I think it would have been more interesting if the story was a bit longer 3shan to know the characters more.Nabaa Baqirhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16879143836195621436noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1421861102069212782.post-49625812149939548962010-02-13T09:05:40.255+04:002010-02-13T09:05:40.255+04:00Just Simple: Yes, there are some missing parts her...<b>Just Simple</b>: Yes, there are some missing parts here and there but I decided to get it over with already and ruin the whole thing for both of them. <br /><br /><b>Maria</b>: It was short, I agree. I wasn't really intending on extending the story more than one part, but you've seen how it went. I was in a rush of ending it, so why would I add more details if I know that in the end Maryam https://www.blogger.com/profile/03760200490233142764noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1421861102069212782.post-70082736358010491412010-02-12T23:50:21.580+04:002010-02-12T23:50:21.580+04:00Hi there,
I don't know how i didn't know...Hi there, <br /><br />I don't know how i didn't know about your blog before! <br />I just started following at the beginning of this series, and i must say you caught me fully. I was thinking of the characters and how long would the series last. I loved Mohammed more than Maria, There must be something wrong with her. She was totally unfair as he never knew of the first chance. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1421861102069212782.post-47620634345816927322010-02-12T21:37:28.244+04:002010-02-12T21:37:28.244+04:00The story was realy interesting but I found it ver...The story was realy interesting but I found it very short. I felt like I expected the ending or something is missing. The events were really quick maybe if it was longer with a bit more happenings. Nevertheless, I really enjoyed reading the story looking forward for other stories to read :D<br />I found Mohammed's character to be nice but in the same time a bit weird he doesn't have that Mariahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08380232387497241592noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1421861102069212782.post-26654439129407111782010-02-12T19:45:02.129+04:002010-02-12T19:45:02.129+04:00hey:)
u know,,i really can't hide my surprise ...hey:)<br />u know,,i really can't hide my surprise from this ending!!! it seems very..abrupt!!unexpected!!like some pieces are missing:-S!!<br />Mohammed seems really a nice guy nd Maria is so into him..he didnt knw abt the past 4 years nd he wants to start over...she didnt give him any chance even after knowing that he was in love wth her too!!! why being so cruel to both of them:(?? *sigh* just_simplehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05441171350310441462noreply@blogger.com